I really like this, but I think your technique.. the directions of your lines, and soft edges could use some work. Possibly bringing out those darker values more too. I really think this has potential. Great wrok!
Thank you very much for the feedback! Yeah, I always find myself confused about the depth and the shadows look to bright and you're right about the strokes, some of them go in the wrong direction and make specific body parts look weird, especially on her left forearm. I still have a lot of hard work to do